Shooting basketball running relay

 Morning, we finished the morning exercises to begin large event, we liner to shooting basketball running relay race.

tiebreaker friends, classmates tension. teacher whistle, the students were immediately rushed out, we desperately shouting and cheering, and some to the runway, shouting and cheering on the wave of the hand. (where the first phrase is summary writing, be specific after shouting and cheering when the students write a variety of modality, since the others were using, how can use only one?) We have successfully passed two goals in the third pass the ball, We (specifically, who) mistake, the ball rolled out, (mood) although he quickly picked it back (plus the action description), they still lag behind, and see other people happy the way (they specifically did not look happy explain how you see it) we feel very bad (compared to detailed descriptions and then some). At this time, their team has been the starting Rights fat Wu Jinping, Zhou Shengzhen our team, not starting it, I was very anxious, but Zhou Shengzhen speed quickly than the Wu Jinping, (is not the opportunity comes, we feel how) but he passes a little mistakes (how now?), we are behind a large portion of students also increased the cheering, but , it is very sad, lost. (a good selection of material, writing a game of intense twists and turns, gripping)

the game, though our team lost the game But we all have fun.


the game, though our team lost the game, but we all had a good fun.

teachers send two students to lead to equipment. in them to lead to equipment, we were divided into four groups. for a while, they came back carrying a white basket, and inside equipped with four basketball, four small pillars orange cone. The teacher and the two students placed with the four pillars of 7 meters from our place. . the teacher to see our thoughts, said: to the next student, a one pass, which group finished first, even if the win. added: Like to fly off like an arrow. Our team of Wu Huanhuan behind and saw this scene, we are anxious straight stomping, waving arms kept shouting: half a step slower, he passed to the next student, and thus overtake each other, we had two, a result of the win, tied for first.

morning, we finished the morning exercises to begin large event, we run the relay liner to shoot basketball.

shoot basketball running relay race (Revised)

tiebreaker friends, classmates were also tense. teacher whistle, the students rushed out immediately, not their turn are encouraging for their own group. Some jumped in the ranks shouting and cheering, clapping her hands and some applauded, some came to the starting line at kept waving. We successfully passed two goals in the third pass the ball, we Chiu Chi-hui mistakes, the ball Gulu Lu to roll out, ah! You do not get too excited, do not necessarily who the winner! Wu Jinping also mistakes and the players have rolled up a football field. Zhousheng Zhen quickly returned to the starting line, but he lost Jingzhou effect even when they pass, the ball ran out, so we picked group of students began to run the ball, they Our team has to catch up a large portion of the students have also increased the cheering, however, is very sad, our team eventually lost.

< p> send two students to teachers, to lead to equipment. (collar devices do not have to write the content, so long as a clear account of the activities of equipment on the line, mentioned below, the game should be divided into four groups, group should be accountable to reverse the situation) for a while They come back, they took a white basket, which is equipped with four basketball, four small pillars orange cone. The teacher and the two students placed with the four pillars of 7 meters away from our place . We do not quite understand why this place (you do not understand that we can understand, others do not understand, how do you know it, is not what they talking about? with the students to express their whispered something more lively ), the teacher to see our thoughts, said: (one to two people ended up on the competition rules must explain clearly ah) : , just listen to the sound of the whistle teacher, four students, like to fly off like an arrow. Our team of Wu Huanhuan behind and saw this scene, (mind how) we cheered for him once, (the language of the specific actions demeanor spend more vivid description of a) that, (Which? the two men do more than just a Board to end the right, approximately match the process to complete) had two, we each won one game tied for first.


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